I am a naturally blond dude. I really don't know what else to say. I guess I'll just say some random things. Guitar, and music in its entirety, would be big passions of mine. I'm shy but can be outgoing if absolutely necessary (or if I really just don't care). I do not discuss politics or religion openly. I'm just saying that so you know. You, the reader. That's who. Man. Yeah.
Wednesday, May 9, 2012
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Mother-In-Law supports her daughter's decisions, however she treats Leonardo, her daughter's husband, like a child, showing her disapproval of her their marriage.
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